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The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050. 0kM5
The provided information shows projections change of the population during a 50-year period by pie charts for two countries, Yemen and Italy, from 2000 till 2050 years. As an overall trend, we have three groups of people 0-14 years, 15-59 and 60 more. ? ? ? ? As show charts of Yemen, we can see not a big change as an increase in the second and third groups, 46. 3%-57. 3% and 3. 6%-5. 7% respectively, and decrease in the first group only from 50. 1% till 37. 0% As opposed to Italy, where the second group present decrease with 61. 6% to 46. 2% and in the first group shows a decline from 14. 3% to 11. 5%. Whereas the third group rises in two times, with 24. 1% to 42. 3%. Comparing data Yemen and Italy illustrate a general decline in the first group, a common rise in the third group, and opposed information in the second group as 46. 3%-57. 3% in Yemen and 61. 6%-46. 2% in Italy.
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of the population during a 50-year period by pie charts for two countries, Yemen and Italy,
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0-14 years, 15-59 and 60 more. ? ? ? ?

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charts of Yemen, we can
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as an increase in the second and third
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, 46. 3%-57. 3% and 3. 6%-5. 7%
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from 50. 1% till 37. 0%

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present decrease with 61. 6% to 46. 2% and in the
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a decline from 14. 3% to 11. 5%. Whereas the third
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rises in two times, with 24. 1% to 42. 3%.

Comparing data Yemen and Italy illustrate a general decline in the
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, a common rise in the third
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, and opposed information in the second
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as 46. 3%-57. 3% in Yemen and 61. 6%-46. 2% in Italy.
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