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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured MNyk
The given diagram represents the way in which use lots of techniques. Overall, it can be clearly seen that manufacturing process account 8 stages. And this are made by techniques. According to the diagram, flour keep in storage silos and car is got flour in this place. Then, flour is spilled to mixer and, water and oil are added to flour. Thirdly, ready-make dough strips by rollers which the rollers play a big role in the transition to the next stage of the process. Next, noodles discs are cooked in oil and these are dried. Thereon, vegetable noodles is stuffed into cups. After words, they meet with labelling and sealling process. Finally, each cups are packing by labelling and sealling. And they are delivered to addresses
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use
lots of techniques.
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clearly
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seen
that manufacturing process account 8 stages. And this
are made
by techniques. According to the diagram,
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flour
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keep
in storage silos and car is
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got
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flour
in this place. Then,
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flour
is spilled
to mixer and, water and oil are
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added
to
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flour
.
Thirdly
, ready-
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make
dough strips by rollers which the rollers play a
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big
role in the transition to the
next
stage of the process.
Next
, noodles discs
are cooked
in oil and these
are dried
. Thereon, vegetable noodles
is stuffed
into cups. After words, they
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meet
with labelling and
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sealling
process.
Finally
, each
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cups
are packing by labelling and
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sealling
. And they
are delivered
to
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addresses
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

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