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The bar chart provides an information about the scores reached by teams A, B and C over four different seasons in 2002, 2003, 2004 and 2005.

The bar chart provides an information about the scores reached by teams A, B and C over four different seasons in 2002, 2003, 2004 and 2005. dY9E
The bar chart provides an information about the scores reached by teams A, B and C over four different seasons in 2002, 2003, 2004 and 2005. Overall, all three teams happened to have its points sharply fluctuating during given period of time. Nevertheless, the most noticeable changes can be observed in team A with the biggest difference in 24 points within 2003 and 2004. With regard to a year 2004, the team A approximately tripled its results from 11 points in 2003 to 35 points in 2004. By contrast, team C level tend to drop slightly from 15 points in 2003 to 12 in 2004. At the very beginning, in 2002, it is shown that team B was a complete leader, if compared to two remained teams. Although team B could have scuppered chances to stand out by scoring only 43 points in 2004, it retained its dominance in current season. Moreover, not only did the team generally win those A and C’s in 2004, but it also outnumbered them in 2005 by an outstanding 55-point margin.
The bar chart provides an information about the scores reached by
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A, B and C over four
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seasons in 2002, 2003, 2004 and 2005.

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, all three
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teams
happened to have its
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points
sharply
fluctuating during
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given
period of time.
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, the most noticeable
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changes
can
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in
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team
A with the biggest difference in 24
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points
within 2003 and 2004.

With regard to a year 2004, the
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team
A approximately tripled its results from 11
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points
in 2003 to 35
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points
in 2004. By contrast,
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C level tend to drop
slightly
from 15
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points
in 2003 to 12 in 2004.

At the
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beginning, in 2002, it
is shown
that
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team
B was a complete leader, if compared to two remained
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teams
. Although
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team
B could have scuppered chances to stand out by scoring
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only
43
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points
in 2004, it retained its dominance in
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current
season.
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, not
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only
did the
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generally
win those A and C’s in 2004,
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it
also
outnumbered them in 2005 by an outstanding
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55-point
margin.

IELTS academic The bar chart provides an information about the scores reached by teams A, B and C over four different seasons in 2002, 2003, 2004 and 2005.

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