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The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. OaGj

The maps illustrate enhancements that were made to a university campus between 2010 and current day. It can be observed from the map that the campus has undergone a lot of over the years. Though many changes were made to the campus over the years, the most significant ones were made to Student’s accommodations. While a new building was added to the existing accommodations, the shops next to the lake were demolished and one more block was added in its place for the purpose of accommodating more students. However, the block next to the lake that was used for accommodating students in 2010, was transformed and further expanded into Student’s facilities such as shops, offices, etc. The older teaching block was renovated and turned into a brand new Arts building and the university offices were converted to Science building. The Lawn and seating area surrounding the lake were completely cleared. The old restaurant was also removed and in its place a new road has been laid.

The maps illustrate enhancements that were made
 to a university campus between 2010 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 day. It can be observed
 from the map that the campus has undergone This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 over the years.

Though This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
were made
 to the campus over the years, the most significant ones were made
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
Student’s
 accommodations. While a new building was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the existing accommodations, the shops next
 to the lake were demolished
 and one more block was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in its place for the purpose of accommodating more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
. However
, the block next
 to the lake that was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for accommodating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 in 2010, was transformed
 and further
 expanded into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
Student’s
 facilities such as shops, offices, etc.

The older teaching block was renovated
 and turned into a 'brand new' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "brand-new".brand-new
brand new
 Arts building and the university offices were converted
 to Science building. The Lawn and seating area surrounding the lake were completely cleared. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 restaurant was also
 removed and in its place a new road has been laid
. 