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Time 16- to 24-year olds spend per week on sport and exercise by gender (England)

Time 16- to 24-year olds spend per week on sport and exercise by gender (England) bbAMB

The chart illistrates the time that youth allocate for physical activities per week. It compares male and females in age group 16 to 24 years old. The chart shows that while 20% of boys are not spending any time to excersize, girls are twice as likely to not have physical activity. Males and females are tend to allocate comparable amount of times, when it comes to moderate amount of excersize. The gender gap is again evident between people that excersize five or more hours per week. With boys are tree times more likely to spend considerable amount of time for excersize. The chart clearly shows that gender does not play a role when it comes to the people that spend some time for physical activities. On the other hand, the girls are less active when other groups are compared.

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