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The chart shows the unemployment situation in australia in year 2018

The chart shows the unemployment situation in australia in year 2018 EKXr
The given line graph illustrates the information about the percentage of unemployment rate in Australia during 2018. It can be clearly seen that in Autralia the percentage of jobless situation was arround 6. 5% in rural areas in the begining of the year. Afterthat, a slight decrease was noticed that proportion and it was reached at 4. 5% in the end of second quarter. Then, fluctuations was depicted by rural areas in the percentum of unemployment in Australia from third to fourth quarter and reached at 5 %. Moving towards the rest of the information, the percentage of jobless rates was 2 % in urban areas in first quarter in Australia, as well as it increased slowly till 4% in the end of 2nd quarter. Urban areas also showed a zigzag trend as rural areas from 4% in third quarter to 4. 5% in the end of the year in the percentile of people who had no jobs in 2018 in Australia. Overall, an increase was revealed by urban areas in the percentum of unemployment situation in Australia but rural areas showed decline in that.
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line graph illustrates the information about the percentage of unemployment rate in Australia during 2018. It can be
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and reached at 5 %. Moving towards the rest of the information, the percentage of jobless rates was 2 % in urban
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. Urban
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who had no jobs in 2018 in Australia.
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decline in that.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in australia in year 2018

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