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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. K1Q3
The line graph illustrates that the proportion of labourers who was joblessness in Australia during year 2012. As can be seen from the graph, it is clearly evident that the percentage of idleness workers in rural regions was higher than in urbans regions. However, after year 2012, the proportion of unemployments in both areas was equivalent approximately. The unemployment rate in 2012 in Australia is quite high, standing at 65 percents in conntryside and 21 percents in city at the beginning of year. In the first-half of year 2012, the amount of umployment in city areas increase sharphly while in provincial areas declined significantly. Afterward, the quantity of idleness labourers in urban areas decreased, returning to the orginal point at beginning of the year. For the remainder of the year, the joblessness in pronvincial zones rose slightly to about 51 percents at the year-end. At the same time, the joblessness in city zones soar to nearly 40 percents, that is 2 times higher than the beginning of the year although there are many grew and dropped in the period.
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labourers
who was joblessness in Australia during
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year
2012.

As can be
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seen
from the graph, it is
clearly
evident that the percentage of idleness workers in rural regions was higher than in
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urbans
regions.
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, after
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2012, the proportion of
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unemployments
in both
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areas
was equivalent approximately.

The unemployment rate in 2012 in Australia is quite high, standing at 65
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percents
in
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conntryside
and 21
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percents
in city at the beginning of
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year
. In the
first
-half of
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year
2012, the amount of
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umployment
in city
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areas
increase
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sharphly
while in provincial
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areas
declined
significantly
. Afterward, the quantity of idleness
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labourers
in urban
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areas
decreased, returning to the
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orginal
point at beginning of the
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year
. For the remainder of the
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year
, the joblessness in
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pronvincial
zones rose
slightly
to about 51
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at the year-
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end
. At the same time, the joblessness in city zones soar to
nearly
40
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percents
,
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year
although there are
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grew and dropped in the period.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

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