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The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. GV1j
The given table below depicts the number of people who visited to Ashdown museum throughout the year beforehand and after its renovation. The illustrated chart below gives the information about the results off surveys that was asked from the people who visited during the same period of time. Overall, there is a noticeable increased of number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year after its renovation, whereas majority of the guests are likely satisfied about the changes. To begin with, during the time before its renovation, there are 74, 000 number of people who visited the Ashdown museum wherein 40% of those people are much likely dissatisfied about the current situation of the gallery. Although, 30% individuals are pleased and less likely 15% are very satisfied which makes small minority of people. Furthermore, the total number of people who visited the museum reached by 92, 000 when the gallery was renovated and made a few changes wherein, 40% of guests are contented about the changes. Although, there are still number of people who are not happy (5%) about it and/or response at all (5%).
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reached by 92, 000 when the gallery
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IELTS academic The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

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