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Mixed graph,The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropologists in work after five years

Mixed graph, The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropologists in work after five years GVDj
The pie charts gives information about Anthropology graduates degree after finish their university. The table illustrated that Anthropologists to earn money in work after five years. Overall, it is clear that the pie chart shows that the greatest percentage of full-time work, by contrast, the smalles rate of Part time work and Postgard study. The table shows the type of employment. Employers who take the highest wage of Government sector, coincide with the smallest wage for Private companies. Looking, the greatest proportion off full time work approximately 52%. Meanwhile more closely at the chart of unemployed and Part time work. Students after finish undergraduate, spent time shows the equal rate. Full-time postgrad study and Not known approximately 8%
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the type of employment. Employers who take the highest wage of
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sector, coincide with the smallest wage for Private
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approximately 52%.
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. Students after finish undergraduate, spent
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IELTS academic Mixed graph, The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropologists in work after five years

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3 paragraphs
117 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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