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The chart shows the proportion of profits made from the seven most viewd movie genres in US cinemas in 1995, 2000 and 2005

The chart shows the proportion of profits made from the seven most viewd movie genres in US cinemas in 1995, 2000 and 2005 gGndd
The chart illustrates the percentage of profits made from seven different types of movies in the US cinema in 3 years as a proportion of total earnings for the industry. Overall, there were significant changes in all types of popular movies, especially in adventure and drama. 4 most view movie genres, consist of adventure, comedy, action, and drama, brought an enormous profit to the US film industry. In 1995, drama was the most common type of movie with nearly 30%, followed by comedy at 20% and action at over 15%. The proportion of profit that came from adventure was just under 15%, more profit than thriller, musicals, and animation combined. 5 years later, comedy, which accounted for 25%, surpassed drama to be the most popular type of movie. An upswing trend was seen in profitable movies such as thrillers, musicals, and animation. Meanwhile, three other movie genres were less profitable that year, with the earnings from drama decreasing the most. In the last year given, comedy continued to be the major movie which made the highest earning for the US film industry. While the profits from animation also grew, adventure movies gained second place, made up close to a quarter. In contrast, the percentage of profit made from action, thrillers, and musicals all declined.
The chart illustrates the percentage of
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made from seven
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of
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in the US cinema in 3 years as a proportion of total earnings for the industry.

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,
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and
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. 4 most view
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genres, consist of
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,
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comedy
, action, and
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drama
, brought an enormous
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profit
to the US film industry.

In 1995,
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with
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30%, followed by
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at 20% and action at over 15%. The proportion of
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that came from
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adventure
was
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under 15%, more
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profit
than thriller, musicals, and animation combined.

5 years later,
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comedy
, which accounted for 25%, surpassed
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drama
to be the most popular
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. An upswing trend was
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such as thrillers, musicals, and animation. Meanwhile, three other
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genres were less profitable that
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, with the earnings from
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decreasing the most.

In the last
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,
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continued to be the major
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which made the highest earning for the US film industry. While the
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from animation
also
grew,
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adventure
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gained second place, made up close to a quarter.
In contrast
, the percentage of
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made from action, thrillers, and musicals all declined.
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