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THE CHART SHOWS THE POLLUTION IN 4 COUNTRIES IN 2012

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The chart illustrates air pollution levels among different countries in 2012 Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that China ranked at the first place with all features. In contrast Australia seems have the lowest data, just higher a little bit about electricity generation than Japan China stood at the first with 80% for industry, about 75% for the transport and 60% for electricity generation. Share the similar partten with China, America recorded about 30%, 55%, 38% respectively for each categories and demonstrate at seccondary place. On the other side, Japan shows just about 15% for electricity generation, about 35% for transport and 43% for industry. With the exception of Australia, all 3 features just about 18-20% and Australia finished at the lowest place
The chart illustrates air pollution levels among
different
countries in 2012

Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that China ranked at the
first
place with all features. In
contrast
Australia
seems have
the lowest data,
just
higher a
little bit
about electricity generation than Japan

China stood at the
first
with 80% for industry, about 75% for the transport and 60% for electricity generation. Share the similar
partten
with China, America recorded about 30%, 55%, 38%
respectively
for each
categories
and demonstrate at
seccondary
place. On the other side, Japan
shows
just
about 15% for electricity generation, about 35% for transport and 43% for industry.
With the exception of
Australia, all 3 features
just
about 18-20% and Australia finished at the lowest
place
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