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The chart gives information about the job positions, hiring situation and salaries of Anthropology graduates after five years who has been graduated from the same university.

The chart gives information about the job positions, hiring situation and salaries of Anthropology graduates after five years who has been graduated from the same university. xD0Rg
The chart gives information about the job positions, hiring situation and salaries of Anthropology graduates after five years who has been graduated from the same university. According to the chart we can see the percentage of students which were hired as full-time, full time working while postgraduate studying, part time work, unemployed, part time working and postgraduate studying and not known which represents the ones with no relevant information. Also, the table gives information of 3 main job positions that Antrhropolgiests choose and their salaries specified in each positions after 5 years of work experience. The chart illustrates that more than 50% of the graduates in this field got employed as part time workers while they were studying postgraduate course whereas only about 8% only choose full time postgraduate studying. About the same percentage of students attempted part time work or unemployed. Having a deeper look at the table the 3 types of employement that has been specified are Freelance consultants, Government sector and private companies. The salaries start from $25, 000 to the highest salary which is about $100, 000 a year. After 5 years of work experience more than half of the people who got employed as Government sector were payed more than $100, 000. However, the Freelancing job also has a good report more than 80% of students were payed more than $75, 000. Considerably, highest percentage of graduates which is about 35% were paid between $50, 000 to $75, 000.
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of Anthropology graduates after five years who has
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from the same university.

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the percentage of students which
were hired
as full-time, full
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time
working while
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postgraduate
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studying
,
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part
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time
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work
, unemployed,
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part
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time
working and
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postgraduate
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studying
and not known which represents the ones with no relevant information.
Also
, the table gives information of 3 main job positions that
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Antrhropolgiests
choose and their
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salaries
specified in each
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positions
after 5 years of
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work
experience.

The chart illustrates that more than 50% of the graduates in this field
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got
employed as
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part
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time
workers while they were
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studying
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postgraduate
course whereas
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only
about 8%
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choose full
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time
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postgraduate
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studying
. About the same percentage of students attempted
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part
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time
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work
or unemployed.

Having a deeper look at the table the 3 types of
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employement
that has
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are Freelance consultants,
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Government
sector and private
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companies
. The
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salaries
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start
from $25, 000 to the highest
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salary
which is about $100, 000 a
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year
. After 5 years of
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work
experience more than half of the
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people
who
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got
employed as
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Government
sector were
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payed
more than $100, 000.
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, the Freelancing job
also
has a
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report more than 80% of students were
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payed
more than $75, 000.
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,
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highest
percentage of graduates which is about 35%
were paid
between $50, 000 to $75, 000.
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