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expenditure of five different countries on 5 categories

expenditure of five different countries on 5 categories ENLQb

The table illustrates the expenditure on several items of consumers of five different nationalities in 2002. All in all, the five countries showed similar and high proportions of national consumer expenditure on the (food/drinks/tobacco) category. Evidence that it varies between (32. 14% to 15. 77%). Whereas all the consumers of different countries spent the least money on the (education/ leisure) category. The highest expenditure was on eaten stuff. Turkey had outnumbered all the countries with an expenditure extent of 32. 14% of national consumer expenditure. After it in second place comes Spain that spent approximately one fifth on food and drinks. The lowest amount of money has been spent on clothing and education/leisure among all the countries. Ireland, Spain, and Turkey spent equal proportions (6. 43%, 6. 51%, and 6. 63%, respectively) on worn things. Although Spain is known for education as well as its beauty, its expenditure on education and leisure is 1. 98%, the least among all.

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