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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Qr8b
The provided bar graph illustrates the amount candidates of both the genders of an Asian country who successfully attempted their driving examination in a period of 4 decades, between 1980 and 2010. To begin with, just under half proportion of women of an Asian country passed their driving test in 1980. The percentage slightly increased in 1990 and reached just over 50%. In following 10 years, these numbers dramatically upsurged and peaked to almost 68%. After 2000, approximately 64% women got success in driving exam in 2010 which was lower than last decade. Apart from this, only 28% Asian men passed their driving test in 1980 which was quite lesser than women in same year. In next two decades, trend showed significant rise in numbers and climbed at the highest point of this scenario at around 49%. In 2010, numbers of Asian men remained constant. Overall, it has been seen that number of Asian men and women who passed their driving tests; increased in these 40 years. However, general trend of men was lower than women.
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examination in a period of 4 decades, between 1980 and 2010.

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under half proportion of
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of an Asian country passed their
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in 1980. The percentage
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increased in 1990 and reached
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over 50%. In following 10 years, these
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dramatically
upsurged and peaked to almost 68%. After 2000, approximately 64%
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women
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got
success in
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exam in 2010 which was lower than last decade.

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28% Asian
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men
passed their
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test
in 1980 which was quite lesser than
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women
in same year. In
next
two decades, trend
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showed
significant rise in
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and climbed at the highest point of this scenario at around 49%. In 2010,
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of Asian
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men
remained constant.

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, it has been
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that
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of Asian
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men
and
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women
who passed their
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; increased in these 40 years.
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was lower than
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.

IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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