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Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant?

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. RMyG
The given map depicts two sites, namely S1 and S2 that have been marked by the architects for a shopping complex to be built in the future. At a glance, it is apparent that the residential area is in the north of the city, while the industrial area is in the east. The western front of the city is covered by a gold course. The two sites are on the either side of the river that passes through the city centre. The proposed S1 is in the northern part of the city. It is conveniently located between the city centre and the residential area. The site is beautifully connected with rail, road and water transport surrounding it. The proposed site S2, on the other hand, is on the south eastern out skirts of the city. It happens to be close to the industrial belt and is nicely connected with road and railway network.
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sites
,
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S1 and S2 that have
been marked
by the architects for a

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shopping
complex to
be built
in the future.

At a glance, it is apparent that the residential area is in the north of the city, while the industrial area is

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in
the east. The western front of the city
is covered
by a
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gold
course. The two
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sites
are on the
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either


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side
of the river that passes through the city
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centre
.

The proposed S1 is in the northern part of the city. It is
conveniently
located between the city
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centre


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and
the residential area. The
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site
is
beautifully
connected with rail, road and water
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transport


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surrounding
it.

The proposed
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site
S2,
on the other hand
, is on the
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south eastern
out skirts of the city. It happens to
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be


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close
to the industrial belt and is
nicely
connected with road and railway network.
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IELTS academic Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

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  American English
10 paragraphs
153 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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