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The chart shows the percentage of water used in different countries in different sectors

The chart shows the percentage of water used in different countries in different sectors 05AQ
The given tabular chart depicts the information about the proportion of water which was used for domestic purposes, agriculture and industry in four different nations (Egypt, Saudi Arabia, Canada, New Zealand). Overall, it can be seen that the maximum proportion of water was utilised for agriculture in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and New Zealand. Whereas, Canada used more water in industry as compared to the other countries. On having a keen glance over the chart, utilisation of water by Egyptian people for agriculture was more (84%) than the other sectors, however the least proportion of water was used in industry (6%) and household task (10%). Thereafter, Saudi Arabia stood at second position in distributing water for agriculture. In industry sector (24%), water was used in double proportion than the domestic sector. Dwelling deeper, in Canada, a large proportion of water was allocated in industry, while water for domestic purposes was used more with the difference of 10% as compared to agriculture and more than two fifths of water was utilised in same sector in New Zealand. Besides this, distribution of water for household chores and in industry were 9% and 45% respectively in same nation.
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water
which was
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used
for domestic purposes,
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industry
in four
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different
nations (Egypt, Saudi Arabia, Canada, New Zealand).
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seen
that the maximum
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water
was
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utilised
for
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agriculture
in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and New Zealand. Whereas, Canada
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used
more
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water
in
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industry
as compared to the other countries.
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having a keen glance over the chart,
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utilisation
of
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water
by Egyptian
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people
for
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agriculture
was more (84%) than the other
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sectors
,
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the least
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proportion
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was
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in
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industry
(6%) and household task (10%). Thereafter, Saudi Arabia stood at second position in distributing
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water
for
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agriculture
. In
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industry
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sector
(24%),
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was
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used
in double
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proportion
than the domestic
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sector
. Dwelling deeper, in Canada, a large
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proportion
of
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water
was allocated
in
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industry
, while
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water
for domestic purposes was
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used
more with the difference of 10% as compared to
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agriculture
and more than two fifths of
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water
was
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utilised
in same
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sector
in New Zealand.
Besides
this, distribution of
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water
for household chores and in
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industry
were 9% and 45%
respectively
in same nation.

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