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THE CHART SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLD IN OWNED AND RENTED ACCOMMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES BETWEEN 1918 AND 2011

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THE CHART SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLD IN OWNED AND RENTED ACCOMMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES BETWEEN 1918 AND 2011. THE FIGURES ARE GIVEN BY THE PERCENTAGES. IN HOUSEHOLDS IN OWNED ACCOMMODATION, THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLD STARTED AT 23 PERCENT IN 1918 WHICH ARE MINIMALLY INCREASING AT 32 PERCENT IN 1930 AND REMAIN STABLE IM 1953. THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLD FROM 1961 TO 2001 WERE AT 41 TO 69 PERCENT, THEY ARE DRAMACALLTICLY INCREASING AND CONTINUE GROWING TO THE HIGHTEST OF ALL IN 2001 AT 79 PERCENT. THE PERCENTAGE IN 2011 AT 65 PERCENT WHICH IS SILIGHTLY DECREASING. IN HOUSEHOLDS IN RENTED ACCOMMODATION, THE PERCENTAGE OF RENTED ACCOMMODATION STARTED AT 76 PERCENT IN 1981 WHICH ARE DRAMATICALLY GROWING UP. THE PERCENTAGE FROM 1939 TO 2001 WERE AT 68 TO 31 PERCENT, THEY SLIGHTY FLUCTUATE WHICH ARE DROPPING DOWN TO THE LOWEST OF ALL IN 2001 AND REMAIN STABLE IN 1971. THE PERCENTAGE OF RENTED ACCOMMODATION IN 2011 AT 35 PERCENT, THEY ARE MINIMALLY DECREASING. OVERALL, THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLD IN OWNED AND RENTED ACCOMMODATION ARE SIGNIFICANTLY DIFFERENT THE HIGHTEST OF ALL IS HOUSEHOLDS IN RENTED ACCOMMODATION AND THE LOWEST OF ALL IS HOUSEHOLDS IN OWNED ACCOMMODATION IN 1918. THE HOUSEHOLDS IN RENTED ACCOMMODATION SLOWY FLUCTUATE AND CHANGE. ON THE OTHER HAND, THE HOUSEHOLDS IN RENTED ACCOMMODATION SILGHTY FLUCTUATE WHICH ARE INCREASING AND DECREASING.
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