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The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given. 2OVM
The graph shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 users, for selected countries. Overall, most of the countries included in the graph have more mobile phones subscribers than landlines. Most European countries have high mobile phone use. The biggest users of mobile phones are the Italians, with 88 cell phones per 100 people. For example, Italy has twice as many mobile phones as landlines, with 88 mobiles per hundred people compared to 45 for landlines. Mobile phone use is low in Canada, with fewer than 40 phones per 100 people. Denmark is also unusual because it has slightly more landlines than mobile phones. However, in some countries, the number of landlines is higher than the number of mobile phones. One example is the USA, where the number of mobiles, at 50 per 100 people, is much lower than the number of landlines, at almost 70 per hundred. A similar pattern can be seen in Canada. The highest number of landlines in the graph is in Denmark, with about 90 per 100 people. In contrast, the lowest figures for fixed lines are in Italy and the UK. In conclusion, it seems that mobile phone use is higher in Europe than in North America.
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of mobile
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and landlines per 100 users, for selected
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Overall
, most of the
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included in the graph have more mobile
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subscribers than landlines. Most European
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have high mobile
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phone
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use
. The biggest users of mobile
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phones
are the Italians, with 88 cell
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phones
per 100
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people
.
For example
, Italy has twice as
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many
mobile
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phones
as landlines, with 88 mobiles per hundred
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people
compared to 45 for landlines. Mobile
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phone
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use
is low in Canada, with fewer than 40
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phones
per 100
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. Denmark is
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because
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more landlines than mobile phones.

However
, in
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, the
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of landlines is higher than the
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of mobile
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. One example is the USA, where the
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of mobiles, at 50 per 100
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, is much lower than the
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of landlines, at almost 70 per hundred. A similar pattern can be
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seen
in Canada. The highest
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number
of landlines in the graph is in Denmark, with about 90 per 100
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people
.
In contrast
, the lowest figures for
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lines are in Italy and the UK.

In conclusion
, it seems that mobile
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is higher in Europe than in North America.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

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