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The chart shows the nationality of the foreign students on a business course at the university in the UK in 1991 and 2011.

The chart shows the nationality of the foreign students on a business course at the university in the UK in 1991 and 2011. gDWK1
The two pie charts strikingly illustrate the specific nationality of foreign students on a business course at the overseas university in the UK between 1991 and 2011. Overall, in 1991 France undoubtedly had the most students with more than half of the considerable proportions at 51% but it dropped dramatically to 31% in 2011. In notable contrast, Nigeria had risen significantly more than nine-fold to 19%. Another interesting growth is India, which almost doubled the percentage from 14% to 26%, whereas for Italy it doubled-dropped from 22% to 11%.
The two pie charts
strikingly
illustrate the specific nationality of foreign students on a business course at the overseas university in the UK between 1991 and 2011.
Overall
, in 1991 France
undoubtedly
had the most students with more than half of the considerable proportions at 51%
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but
it dropped
dramatically
to 31% in 2011. In notable contrast, Nigeria had risen
significantly
more than nine-fold to 19%.

Another interesting growth is India, which almost doubled the percentage from 14% to 26%, whereas for Italy it doubled-dropped from 22% to 11%.
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