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The chart shows the main categories of US agricultural exports in 2002.

The chart shows the main categories of US agricultural exports in 2002. PEprp
The pie chart given depicts some principal agricultural items exported by America in 2002.  Overall, the chart is divided into 7 segments. It is clear that grains and feed were the most significant exports and cotton accounted for the smallest proportion of the total.  As can be seen from the graph, grains and feed constituted 26% of the total, followed by other agricultural products, which was 4% less than the former. The percentage of oilseeds and products was the third highest, occupied nearly one fifth of the whole quantity. 13% of the agricultural produce exported belonged to meat, poultry and products. Fruits and nuts, vegetables and products only accounted for 8% and 9% respectively. And at the bottom end was cotton with negligible ratio (just 4%).
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principal agricultural items exported by America in 2002.  
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that grains and feed were the most significant exports and cotton accounted for the smallest proportion of the total.  As can be
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from the graph, grains and feed constituted 26% of the total, followed by other agricultural
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products
, which was 4% less than the former. The percentage of
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oilseeds
and
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products
was the third highest, occupied
nearly
one fifth of the whole quantity. 13% of the agricultural produce exported belonged to meat, poultry and
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products
. Fruits and nuts, vegetables and
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products
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accounted for 8% and 9%
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. And at the bottom
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was cotton with negligible ratio (
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IELTS academic The chart shows the main categories of US agricultural exports in 2002.

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