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More and more people are buying good online these day, without going into a shop. What are the advantages and disadvantages for companies and for individuals, of shopping in this way

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Many people claim that an increasing number of buying goods online these days, without going into a shop. However, not surprisingly buying goods online bring many benefits for buying goods online in term of improving their buying goods online as well as problem these who find it difficult to Companies and for individuals of the shopping in this way. I totally examine those question below by considering the obvious benefits and drawback in this way To begin with, buying goods online has three main benefits. Firstly, the environment is important because we are forced to. For instance from morning to night, all use telephone and use computer every day. Furthermore we can make buying goods online. Secondly we can get good quality. Thirdly, they can easy buying goods for example application shopee can see easy shipping and easy buying. Therefore, experience will be helpful in buying goods online. There are some considerable downside, the main disadvantage is when mistake with goods online They unable edit. as well as they no longer have the direct support network from company. Another drawback in we may not ready or unable to cope with problems that arise at the time associated with buying goods online Not only mistake but also wait so long. Thus we going into a shop fast more than buying goods online In conclusion, despite in the fact that buying goods online these days, without going into a shop as far as I know it is important for buying goods online I am concerned, I firmly believe that is probable that best way of buying goods online
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in term of improving their
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as well
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IELTS academic More and more people are buying good online these day, without going into a shop. What are the advantages and disadvantages for companies and for individuals, of shopping in this way

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265 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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