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Online learning can lead to the unnecessary of schools in the future. Do you agree or disagree

Online learning can lead to the unnecessary of schools in the future. AgyPM

Many people claim that an increasing number of students are online learning in the future. However, not surprisingly, the future will be upward trend to online learning in terms of education, as well as problem of those who find it difficult to using technology with family and friends. I totally believe that online learning brings more benefits but I disagree some reason. I will examine this question below by considering the obvious agree and disagree in this way. To begin with, learning online has three main benefits. Firstly, students are learned throughout the times because they can repeat to study, and they can study at all a place. Secondly, while they can be searching the topic on web Brower bring knowledge for them. Thirdly, they are focused to search the content on many web blog online. Therefore, this experience will be understanding the culture in the future. There have some downsides. Which the main disadvantage in this way, the student can’t work with another because they no longer the direct support network of their family and friend. Another many down back is cost high associated with using technology for online learning. Not only the cost for tablet but also other device as well as school fees. Thus, we can save a lot of money if we study at school. In conclusion, I disagree that school is unnecessary because the education is important for them. As they want to professional to teach and they can go to school to find knowledge and share with friends bring more benefit for them.

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