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The chart shows the end of year value for 4 major international money market indices in 2015,2016,2017 and 2018

The chart shows the end of year value for 4 major international money market indices in 2015, 2016, 2017 and 2018 53roB

The bar chart depicts the end of the year value for four major international money market indices over a period of 4 years starting on 2015. Overall, it is clearly seen that all four of them mirror each other in trend. There is a steady increase in value for all the markets during the years 2015 to 2017. In contrast, there is a sudden drop in value for each of the markets. According to the chart, the Dow Jones and the FTSE 100 are the two markets with the highest index value, starting at about 11, 000 and 6, 000 respectively in 2015. They both follow an upward trend in the next two years, with the US market index reaching around 13, 000 and the UK market index a little over 6, 000. Both the Dow Jones and the FTSE 100's index values drop dramatically in 2018; at almost 9, 000 for the US market and just over 4, 000 for the UK market. During 2015 to 2017 the CAC 40 and the KOSPI follow a slight increase in value with the French market rising from a little over 4, 000 to almost 6, 000 and the Korean market from a 1, 500 in 2015 to almost 2, 017. There is also a decrease for both money markets in 2018; the value dropping down to less than 4, 000 for the CAC40 and about a 1, 000 for the KOSPI

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