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Percentage of water used in different countries

Percentage of water used in different countries JlmpD

The charts below illustrates the percentage of water utilized for various purposes in six countries. Firstly the percentage of industrial use in north America and Europe was showed the huge result than other countries and industrial use become one of the most used product in these two countries. In addition agricultural use started to rise however instead of this. In Europe showed slightly deep can been shown by 39 percent

The charts below illustrates the percentage of water utilized for various purposes in six countries. Firstly
 the percentage of industrial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 in Capitalize specific, well-defined geographical regions: "North America"North America
north America
 and Europe was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 the huge result than other countries and industrial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 become one of the most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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product
 in these two countries. In Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?addition,
addition
 agricultural This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to rise however
instead
 of this. In Europe This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
slightly
 deep can been shown
 by 39 Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphpercent.percent!percent?percent:percent,percent;
percent