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The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain.

The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. B0Ea
The supplied bar chart investigates the time which man and woman spend on various 6 household chores per day in Great Britain. Overall, it is obvious that the females spend their most of time cooking, cleaning, clothing, and caring child whereas males spend more time on odd jobs and gardening. Generally, the most consuming chore is cooking, baking, and washing for women with 74 minutes per day higher than men, 30 minutes per day. Similarly, house tidying, cleaning take 58 minutes and 13 minutes for each man and woman, respectively. In contrast to females, males spend less time, caring for children and playing by 28. 5 minutes. Moreover, there is significant diversity between the time which is spent by men and women to washing, ironing, and sewing by exactly 23 minutes. On the other hand, males spend more time in case of gardening, pet caring, and maintaining odd jobs. Therefore, in these two chores males spend roughly 50 and 36 minutes compared to 21 and under 10 minutes per day by a woman, respectively.
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cooking, cleaning, clothing, and caring child whereas
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on odd jobs and gardening.
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, 30 minutes per day.
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tidying, cleaning take 58 minutes and 13 minutes for each
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less
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, caring for children and playing by 28. 5 minutes.
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and women to washing, ironing, and sewing by exactly 23 minutes.

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in case of gardening, pet caring, and maintaining odd jobs.
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roughly 50 and 36 minutes compared to 21 and under 10 minutes per day by a woman,
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IELTS academic The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain.

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