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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. NYgb
The provided table chart illustrates the information about the sale of eatables and beverages during the week of October from Monday to Sunday (7-13) at a small restaurant situated in the business district downtown. To begin at lunchtime in that small restaurant, the sale was $2400 on Monday when a week started. Till Wednesday this scale was increased up to |$ 259. But at the end of the week on Sunday, during lunchtime, that small restaurant’s sale was $15550 which was the lunchtime in the whole week. Moreover, over the same week on Friday during dinner time, a small restaurant was sold food for $ 4350 which was the high sale during dinner. after then, when the week started restaurant had sold dinner for about $3623 on Monday. But on the weekend, Sunday a small restaurant did a sale of dinner for $ 2450 which was the lowest amount of money as a dinner cost for a week. Overall, It is immediately apparent from the table chart that the high scale of dinner was on Friday and high sale of lunch was on Wednesday respectively
The provided table chart illustrates the information about the
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of eatables and beverages during the
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of October from Monday to Sunday (7-13) at a
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small
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situated in the business district downtown.

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, the
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was $2400 on Monday when a
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. Till Wednesday this scale
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on Sunday, during lunchtime, that
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was $15550 which was the lunchtime in the whole week.

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on Friday during
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time, a
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was sold
food for
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which was the high
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for about $3623 on Monday.
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on the weekend, Sunday a
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did a
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of
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for
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which was the lowest amount of money as a
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cost for a
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.
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was on Friday and high
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of lunch was on Wednesday
respectively
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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