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The bar graph provide the data about a group of home and international student learning computer science at Britain institute from 2010 to 2012. To embark with, there were more fluctuation in the number of home male student study the particular subject. In 2010, 40 male candidates are from their home town and international students were 50%. Moreover, in 2011 the number of male home student fall from 40 to 24 in 2011, looking at an international pupil are near to 25 only. However, there is dramatic improvement in course. The local pupils inclined to approximately 43% in 2012, whereas overseas students shows a similar trend that climbed to all time high and reach about 40s. In female department, there were no much progress in overseas student. In the year 2010, group of female were about 35 which grows to 45 in 2011. however international were very less in number, only 15 women are studying computer science which increased slightly by 2% only in next year. Furthermore, in 2012, there were only 18 international women while locals are 2. 5 time higher (45). Overall, it can be observed that, the number of international female students were half of the home candidate, while there is an upward trend in overseas male students studying computer science at university compared to local pupils.

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