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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. JNGk
The line graph provides information about the number of people who migrate from countrysides to city centers in Iran, Indonesia and Russia over the period 2000-2025, including future predictions. Overall, we can observe people movement from Indonesia is very less comparing with Russia and Iran that gradually increases. In Indonesia it seems that there is no tremendous increase in the number of people shifting to cities even though the count increases from 10 to 30, it stays constant to some extent. On the other hand we can see not many people moving from Iran in the initial stages. However the trends continue to change dramatically and reach above 90 by 2025. People of Russia show more interest in city life from the initial years. But the trend starts to slow down after reaching 70 in the year 2015 and stays a bit constant and grows up only until 80. Perhaps it will decrease more than that of Iran in the near future.
The line graph provides information about the number of
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people
who migrate from countrysides to city centers in Iran, Indonesia and Russia over the period 2000-2025, including future predictions.

Overall
, we can observe
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people
movement from Indonesia is
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very
less comparing with Russia and Iran that
gradually
increases.

In
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Indonesia it
seems that there is no tremendous increase in the number of
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people
shifting to cities
even though
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some
extent.
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we can
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see
not
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many
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people
moving from Iran in the initial stages.
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However
the trends continue to
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dramatically
and reach above 90 by 2025.

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People
of Russia
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more interest in city life from the initial years.
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But
the trend
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starts
to slow down after reaching 70 in the year 2015 and stays a bit constant and grows up
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only
until 80. Perhaps it will decrease more than that of Iran in the near future.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years.

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6.0
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