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The graph below compares figures for the production and consumption of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000.It also predicts figure for 2025.

The graph below compares figures for the production and consumption of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000. It also predicts figure for 2025. mYkK
The line graph illustrates the information about the product and utilization of energy in the united states between 1950 and 2000. The figure is expected to increase in the year 2025. Also, the graph is measured in units. Overall, US consumption experienced an upward trend, while manufacture showed a lowest trend throughout the period. To begin with, the number of power units fluctuated and remain constant from 1950 to 1975 at just below 50 in producing. Then, it will be rose slightly in the future year 2025 around 60 units of energy. However, in terms of expenditure, which was accounting for merely 26 units of energy, vary to a just below 50 in the year 1960. Likewise, in the year 1990 the value of units peak at more than three-quarters whereas the graph predicated to grow and point at approximately 125 units of power.
The line graph illustrates the information about the product and utilization of energy in the
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between 1950 and 2000. The figure is
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2025.
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Overall
, US consumption experienced an upward trend, while manufacture
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a
lowest trend throughout the period.

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fluctuated and remain constant from 1950 to 1975 at
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below 50 in producing. Then, it will be rose
slightly
in the future
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year
2025 around 60
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units
of energy.

However
, in terms of expenditure, which was accounting for
merely
26
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units
of energy, vary to a
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just
below 50 in the
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year
1960.
Likewise
, in the
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1990 the value of
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peak at more than three-quarters whereas the graph predicated to grow and point at approximately 125
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of power.
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IELTS academic The graph below compares figures for the production and consumption of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000. It also predicts figure for 2025.

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