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from the set of bar graphs, first graph illustrates the millions of marriages and divorces happened in the USA from 1970 to 2000, and second one about the percentage of married adults in America for the year 1970 and 2000.

from the set of bar graphs, first graph illustrates the millions of marriages and divorces happened in the USA from 1970 to 2000, and second one about the percentage of married adults in America for the year 1970 and 2000. NYgW
from the set of bar graphs, first graph illustrates the millions of marriages and divorces happened in the USA from 1970 to 2000, and second one about the percentage of married adults in America for the year 1970 and 2000. Analyzing the former bar chart, in 1970, there was marriage rate was higher than the divorce rate, both were almost 2. 5 million and about 1 million respectively. After a decade the divorce rates were increased and crossed 1 million, while the marriage rate was not changed. In 1990, the marriage and divorce rates were dropped slightly, the marriage rate was under 2. 5 million and the divorce rate was above 1 million. In a millennium, the marriage rate declined and reached 2 million, when divorces were same like 1970. According to a later graph, the majority of adults were married in 1970, it was about 70%. Besides, married adults in 2000 were nearly 60%. By contrast, above 10% and almost 20% of adults were never married in 1970 and 2000 respectively. In the contrast, a negligible percentage of American adults were divorced in 1970. And also, widowed adults in both years were under 1 million. Overall, it can be seen that during thirty years USA marriage rates was declined. The, Although higher American adults married in 1970 than in 2000.
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and
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happened in the USA from 1970 to 2000, and second one about the percentage of married
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adults
in America for the year 1970 and 2000.

Analyzing the former bar chart, in 1970, there was
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marriage
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rate
was higher than the
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divorce
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, both were almost 2. 5
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million
and about 1
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million
respectively
. After a decade the
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divorce
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rates
were increased
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million
, while the
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marriage
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was not
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. In 1990, the
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marriage
and
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divorce
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rates
were dropped
slightly
, the
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marriage
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rate
was under 2. 5
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million
and the
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divorce
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was above 1
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million
. In a millennium, the
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declined and reached 2
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, when
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were same like 1970.

According to a later graph, the majority of
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were married
in 1970, it was about 70%.
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in 2000 were
nearly
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adults
were never married in 1970 and 2000
respectively
. In the contrast, a negligible percentage of American
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adults
were divorced
in 1970. And
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adults
in both years were under 1 million.

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, it can be
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seen
that during thirty years USA
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marriage
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rates
was declined
. The, Although higher American
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married in 1970 than in 2000.
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IELTS academic from the set of bar graphs, first graph illustrates the millions of marriages and divorces happened in the USA from 1970 to 2000, and second one about the percentage of married adults in America for the year 1970 and 2000.

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