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the chart shows the division of household task by gender in great britain

the bar graph compares the segment of household task perform by males and females in great britain. mostly, the female work on inside house where as male work outside of home. according to graph females spend more time on cooking, baking, cleaning, child caring and sweing with 74, 58, 49. 5 and 45 respectively. whereas the male engage almost half of the minuttes. however, males utilize their maximum time on gardening, pet care and odd jobs. similarly males spends only 1. 5 minutes on colth washing, ironing and sweing. likewise womens spend only 9. 5 minutes on the odd jobs. But the pet care, care of own seems to be on same ratio with 20 1nd 21 minutes. women work significantly more than men on household work. the males utilize their time outside home in the great britian.
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outside of home.
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sweing
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however
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utilize their maximum time on gardening, pet care and odd jobs.
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women
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