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The chart shows the amount of corn and wheat sold in bushels from 2012 to 2016.

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The given chart demonstrates the amount of corn and wheat sold in bushels from 2012 to 2016. The unit used is bushels. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the number of bushels of corn sold tended to increase steadily over the past 5 years. Therefore, the quantity of wheat sold in bushels had a slight change from 2012 to 2016. To begin, about 1, 250, 000 corn bushels sold was recorded in 2012. Therefore, in 5 years from 2012, the amount of corn sold increased dramatically (about 2, 250, 000 bushels in 2016), 1, 8 times higher compared to the beginning of 2012. It is clearly that from 2012 to 2014, there was a rapid increase from 1, 000, 000 bushels of wheat to 1, 500, 000 bushels. By contrast, wheat sales in 2016 (approximately 1, 450, 000) decreased slightly over a three-year period compared to 2014. (approximately 1, 500, 000).
The
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chart demonstrates the amount of
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corn
and
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wheat
sold in bushels from 2012 to 2016. The unit
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used
is bushels.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that the number of bushels of
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corn
sold tended to increase
steadily
over the past 5 years.
Therefore
, the quantity of
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wheat
sold in bushels had a slight
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change
from 2012 to 2016.

To
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begin
, about 1, 250, 000
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corn
bushels sold
was recorded
in 2012.
Therefore
, in 5 years from 2012, the amount of
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corn
sold increased
dramatically
(about 2, 250, 000 bushels in 2016), 1, 8 times higher compared to the beginning of 2012.

It is
clearly
that from 2012 to 2014, there was a rapid increase from 1, 000, 000 bushels of
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wheat
to 1, 500, 000 bushels. By contrast,
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wheat
sales in 2016 (approximately 1, 450, 000) decreased
slightly
over a three-year period compared to 2014. (approximately 1, 500, 000).
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6.5
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