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there was a significant growth in the average pass rates' proportion of bissiness, science, maths and fininnecrion during the period. the figure for science and maths and danicerion increase rapidly about 20% from 38% to 60% and from 28% to 48% repectively, in addition, bussiness average pass rates rise dramatically by about 30% at 52%. Meanwhile, there was a sligh invrease in the pass rates of computer science and humanities which rise by about 11% from 70% to 82% anf from 2% to 13% respectively from 2008 to 2012. a differnt trend was witnesed in the percentage of health science which remain stable at 42% through out this 4 year period
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