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The pie chart compare the amount in 18 to 25 age group use to watch telvision in Canada 2009 and 2019.Summerasze the information.

The pie chart compare the amount in 18 to 25 age group use to watch telvision in Canada 2009 and 2019. Summerasze the information. Ed3oR

The pie chart compare the amount in 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in 2009 and 2019. There were moblile phone, laptop, tablet, desktop computers, flat screen tv and conventional tv. Overall, the percentage of watched television in Canada conventional TV range has decrse considerab; y Nevertheless, the flat screen TV watched grouup has increased sharply. Over the decades although laptop and computers were decrese as the same way in televiion watchers. In 2009 conventional TV had been watched at 34% in Canada. But that decrease sharply in 2009 at 4%. In parallely, flat screen TV has incresed at 27% in 2019 it has increased at 19% in 2019 than 2009. The laptop and desktop was decrse as the same way in 2019 rather than 2009 in persentage of of 12% The tablet was showed strinking increse with 19% in 2019.

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