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The chart shows how people travelled to work in 2012 and 2018.

The chart shows how people travelled to work in 2012 and 2018. BMDXX
The information regarding various modes of transport used by people to commute for work in Grahamston during the year 2012 and 2018 is depicted by the tabular chart. The data is calibrated in percentile. Having an overview, it is crystal clear that people drove to work prominently during the mentioned years. Whereas, only few used walking and cycling as the mode to reach to work. After having a myopic observation, it can be observed that about 55% of individuals in 2012 used car to commute to work which raised by 10% over the period of 6 years. While, the second best was using private vehicle as transport by the commoners in Grahamston; more than 10 % of people used it during 2018 and was less than 5% during 2012. On further analysis of the tabular chart, the least preferred mode of transport used by the habitants of Grahamston for work is walking and bicycling, which was recorded less than 5% during the mention years. Whereas, some individuals of slightly less than 10 % and remained almost stable during 2018 as well as 2012 used other modes of transport which includes ferry, airplane and taxi.
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2012 and 2018
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drove to
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during the mentioned years. Whereas,
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few
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walking and cycling as the
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to reach to work.

After having a myopic observation, it can
be observed
that about 55% of individuals in 2012
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used
car to commute to
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work
which raised by 10% over the period of 6 years. While, the second best was using private vehicle as
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transport
by the commoners in
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Grahamston
; more than 10 % of
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it during 2018 and was less than 5% during 2012.

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further
analysis of the tabular chart, the least preferred
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Grahamston
for
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is walking and bicycling, which
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less than 5% during the mention years. Whereas,
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