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the chart shows how frequently people in usa ate in a fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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USA has a very popular fast food culture the pace of life in the urban cities is quiet fast so the people living and working there prefer eating fast food because it is quick and easily available for the people who are on a time crunch. In the following graph we can see a comparison between 2003 to 2013 The percentage of people who consume fast food on every day basis is somewhat same from 2003 to 2013 which is below 5%. In 2003 it is slightly higher than 2006 and 2013 People having fast food several times a week in 2003 and 2013 is above 15% and that of 2006 IS 20% People consuming fast food once a week in 2006 is comparatively higher which is above 30% than 2003 and 2013 that is 31% and above 25% Consumption of fast food once or twice a month was higher in 2013 which is above 30%. In 2003 it was slightly less that is 30% and in 2006 it was 25% lowest of all Fast food consumed few times a year is same for the year 2006 and 2013 that is 15% and it is less for 2003 which is just above 10% People who never consume fast food are at 5% or below 5% for 2003 it is 5% and for 2006 and 2013 it is below 5%

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