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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. 7a5x2
The bar chart in figure presents data on total exports of a country, per five different product categories, in both 2015 and 2016. On the other hand, the table displays actual percentage changes of exports between 2015 and 2016 as data is measured in billions of dollars. Overall, Petroleum products and Engineered goods compose the focal points of total exports, both in 2015 and 2016. These two sectors, the textile one and total agricultural products are also the only categories that have increased throughout the two sampled periods, while Gems and Jewellery witnessed a modest decrease in relative exports. Firstly, the country surveyed has recorded a competitive advantage in terms of petroleum products exported as their total value in both 2015 and 2016 has constantly stayed above 60 billion dollars and has increased by 3%. Engineering goods are also a main component of this country’s total exports as they started at just below 60 billion dollars in 2015 and increased by 8. 5%, recording total exports of more than 60 billion dollars in 2016. On the other hand, Gems and jewellery, agricultural products and textiles, which are minor sectors with respect to the first two, record mixed trends. Agricultural goods and textile products are the two sectors that witness an increase in respective exports, with +0. 81% and +15. 24%, respectively, making the textile industry the fastest growing one. On the contrary, Gems and jewellery, the third sector in terms of total exports, with more than 40 billion dollars in goods exported in 2015 and 2016, was the only category that experienced a modest relative fall of 5. 18%.
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categories, in both 2015 and 2016.
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and Engineered
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compose the focal points of
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, both in 2015 and 2016. These two
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one and
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agricultural
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categories that have increased throughout the two sampled periods, while Gems and
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Jewellery
witnessed a modest decrease in relative exports.

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exported as their
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value in both 2015 and 2016 has
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and has increased by 3%. Engineering
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in 2015 and increased by 8. 5%, recording
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of more than 60
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in 2016.

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, agricultural
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and
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textiles
, which are minor
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two, record mixed trends. Agricultural
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are the two
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, with +0. 81% and +15. 24%,
respectively
, making the
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industry the fastest growing one.

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in terms of
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in
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exported in 2015 and 2016, was the
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category that experienced a modest relative fall of 5. 18%.
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