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The chart shows different methods of waste disposal in a Europe from 2005 to 2007

The chart shows different methods of waste disposal in a Europe from 2005 to 2007 GJA92
The bar chart depicts three types of resort of garbage disposal in a Europe over a period of 4 yearsOverall, both landfill and dumping in sea method minimally dropped throughout over the given period, a wild fluctuation was witnesed that coming to the burning method. It was also apparent that there was a soar in the burning until the fourth year. The figure of landfill fell drastically from 70 million tones to 40 million tones between 2005 to 2008, which was observed a decrease of 10 million tones per year. A similar trend saw the resort of dumping in sea disposal slightly decline from 55 mmillion tones to 50 million tones before stabilizing a steady level for 2 years later. However, there was a drop to 40 millions tone in 2008. The period from 2005 to 2007 experienced a fall around 25 million tonesin the burning method of disposal, and then there was a wild fluctuation increasing to 65 million tones in 2008
The bar chart depicts three types of resort of garbage disposal in a Europe over a period of 4
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yearsOverall
, both landfill and dumping in sea method
minimally
dropped throughout over the
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given
period, a wild fluctuation was
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witnesed
that coming to the burning method. It was
also
apparent that there was a soar in the burning until the fourth year. The figure of landfill fell
drastically
from 70
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million
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to 40
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between 2005 to 2008
, which
was observed
a decrease of 10
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million
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per year. A similar trend
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saw
the resort of dumping in sea disposal
slightly
decline from 55
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mmillion
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tones
to 50
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million
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tones
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before
stabilizing a steady level for 2 years later.
However
, there was a drop to 40
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in 2008. The period from 2005 to 2007 experienced a fall around 25
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million
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tonesin
the burning method of disposal, and then there was a wild fluctuation increasing to 65
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in 2008
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