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The table illustrates the quantity of beef that was exported from five contries in the years 2012, 2014, and 2016.

The table illustrates the quantity of beef that was exported from five contries in the years 2012, 2014, and 2016. Q5ARP
The table illustrates the quantity of beef that was exported from five contries in the years 2012, 2014, and 2016. Overall, Brazil exported beef more than Switzerland, Japan, Norway, Uruguay, combined. It is also evidence that Japan had highest growth rate during the period. Look at this graph more closely, one can see that the amount of beef Japan started at 224 tonnes in 2012, from which it increased almost five times to end the period at 1005 tonnes. Similarity, the figure for Brazil began at 125 465 tonnes in 2012 and grew gradually before reaching the best exporter position with 137 650 tonnes in 2016. The second largest beef exporter was Uruguay, which consistently exported around 40000 tonnes every year. In contrast, Norway and Switzerland had the lowest export volume
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contries
in the years 2012, 2014, and 2016.

Overall
, Brazil exported
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more than Switzerland, Japan, Norway, Uruguay, combined. It is
also
evidence that Japan had
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highest
growth rate during the period.

Look at this graph more
closely
, one can
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that the amount of
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Japan
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started
at 224 tonnes in 2012, from which it increased almost five times to
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end
the period at 1005 tonnes. Similarity, the figure for Brazil began at 125 465 tonnes in 2012 and grew
gradually
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before
reaching the best exporter position with 137 650 tonnes in 2016.

The second largest
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beef
exporter was Uruguay, which
consistently
exported around 40000 tonnes every year.
In contrast
, Norway and Switzerland had the lowest export
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volume
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the quantity of beef that was exported from five contries in the years 2012, 2014, and 2016.

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