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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart indicates the element of GDP in the UK between 1992 and 2000. Overall, when we take a look at the chart, we see both industries' percentages have increased over the years. However there is an exception. Although the percentage of IT industry was always more than the percentage of Service industry, still the latter industry have significantly raised. In the beginning of the chart IT industry was around 6. 1 %, whilst Service industry was precisely 4 %. Both of the items have changed for a short time. The IT industry up to about 8. 1 %, after that has diminished a little approximately to 7. 8 %. On the other hand, Service industry were 6. 2 % and 6. 5 % respectively. Both former and latter industries have increased in the last years, meanhwhile these amiuts are also the most amounts of the industries. Former industry up to exactly 12 %, when ladder industry was around 7. 7 % IT industy was on the peak of the chart with almost 15 %. Fortunately Service industry had also the best figure with around 8. 1 % by 2000
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indicates the element of GDP in the UK between 1992 and 2000.

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, when we take a look at the
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chart
, we
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both industries' percentages have increased over the years.
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However
there is an exception.

Although the percentage of IT
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industry
was always more than the percentage of
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Service
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industry
,
still
the latter
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industry
have
significantly
raised. In the beginning of the
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chart
IT
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industry
was around 6. 1 %, whilst
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Service
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industry
was
precisely
4 %. Both of the items have
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changed
for a short time. The IT
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industry
up to about 8. 1 %, after that has diminished a
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little
approximately to 7. 8 %.
On the other hand
,
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Service
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industry
were 6. 2 % and 6. 5 %
respectively
. Both former and latter
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industries
have increased in the last years,
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meanhwhile
these
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are
also
the most amounts of the
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. Former
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industry
up to exactly 12 %, when ladder
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industry
was around 7. 7 % IT
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industy
was on the peak of the
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with almost 15 %.
Fortunately
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Service
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industry
had
also
the best figure with around 8. 1 % by 2000

IELTS academic The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

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