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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. VmbQ
The two graphs illustrates the number of enrolments in terms of overseas students and regional students in Australia universities from 2001 to 2010. Overall, the total number of pupils who study abroad as well as the number of Australian pupils experienced an upward trend in the period shown. Meanwhile, the ones who live in Australian's commencing number saw a mild fluctuation. In terms of overseas learners, there was a total of 20000 students assigned in 2001, this number gradually increases in the next 10 years and reachs a peak of over 80000 appliants in 2010. In the meantime, the ones commencing started with a lower number of 10000 individuals, steadily climbed and got recorded for 40000 people, then remained unchanged till the end of the period shwon. Turning to the line graph of students born in Australia, in the first year of the period there was 40000 elrolments made. This number gradually went up and peaked at 2008 with about more than 600000 and stablized till the end of 2010. Conversely, the quantity of people commencing in Australia was only nearly 20000 in 2001, hit the highest point of over 20000 in 2002 then went through a downward trend till 2006.
The two graphs illustrates the
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enrolments
in terms of overseas
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students
and regional
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students
in Australia universities from 2001 to 2010.

Overall
, the total
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number
of pupils who study abroad
as well
as the
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number
of Australian pupils experienced an upward trend in the period shown. Meanwhile, the ones who
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live
in Australian's commencing
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number
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saw
a mild fluctuation.

In terms of overseas learners, there was a total of 20000
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students
assigned in 2001, this
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number
gradually
increases in the
next
10 years and
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reachs
a peak of over 80000
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appliants
in 2010. In the meantime, the ones commencing
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started
with a lower
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number
of 10000 individuals,
steadily
climbed and
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got
recorded for 40000
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people
, then remained unchanged till the
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end
of the period
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shwon
.

Turning to the line graph of
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students
born in Australia, in the
first
year of the period there was 40000
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elrolments
made. This
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number
gradually
went up and peaked at 2008 with about more than 600000 and
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stablized
till the
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end
of 2010.
Conversely
, the quantity of
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people
commencing in Australia was
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only
nearly
20000 in 2001, hit the highest point of over 20000 in 2002 then went through a downward trend till 2006.
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