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The graph shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present

The graph shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present 8qX5
The graph gives information about the number of library books read by males and females at Starmouth School since 2006 to the present. Overall, the percentage of read females has been upward trend. On the other hand, the boys have become fluctuation since the precent time. Firstly, the number of females reader increased gradually about 40 books from 2009 to 2010. Afterwards, there was a significant rise of 100 books over a decade. Moreover, it also increased slightly about 140 books which has been read until the precent time. Secondly, the percentage of boys read was about 50 books in 2009. After that, there was a slight growth from 40 to 80 books in 2010 and it still continued but just increased steadily about 100 books during a decade. However, in 2011, the number of books reader have fallen dramatically at 80 books by boys and in addition it has been decreased nowadays.
The graph gives information about the number of library
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by males and females at
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Starmouth
School since 2006 to the present.
Overall
, the percentage of
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females has been upward trend.
On the other hand
, the boys have become fluctuation since the
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precent
time.

Firstly
, the number of females reader increased
gradually
about 40
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books
from 2009 to 2010. Afterwards, there was a significant rise of 100
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books
over a decade.
Moreover
, it
also
increased
slightly
about 140
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books
which has been
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read
until the
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precent
time.

Secondly
, the percentage of boys
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was about 50
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books
in 2009. After that, there was a slight growth from 40 to 80
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books
in 2010 and it
still
continued
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increased
steadily
about 100
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books
during a decade.
However
, in 2011, the number of
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reader have fallen
dramatically
at 80
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books
by boys and
in addition
it has
been decreased
nowadays.
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