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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. PAkp
The rendered bar graph depicts the GDP components between 1992 and 2000 in UK Overall, it is conspicuous from the bar graph that IT Industry has more proportion of components than the Service Industry in all the years from 1992 to 2000. Explicitly, the IT industry has a peak percentage in the year 2000 and this is the highest record whereas the Service industry has only half of the percentage of the IT industry in that year. Marginally, there is almost same proportion in the years 1994 and 1995 in the IT industry(8%). However, the percentage soared up from 6% to 7% in the Service Industry in 1994 and 1995 respectively. Meanwhile, the IT industry has the lowest proportion in the year 1992 with 6% whereas counterpart has two percent less than the other industry. Eventually, there is a similar trend of proportion in all the following years for the Service Industry. The IT industry's GDP components are gradually increasing in all the consequent years except in 1996. The The second highest percentage(12%) was observed for IT in the year 1998.
The rendered bar graph depicts the GDP components between 1992 and 2000 in UK

Overall
, it is conspicuous from the bar graph that IT
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Industry
has more
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proportion
of components than the
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Service
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Industry
in all the years from 1992 to 2000.

Explicitly
, the IT
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industry
has a peak
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percentage
in the
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year
2000 and this is the highest record whereas the
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Service
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industry
has
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only
half of the
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percentage
of the IT
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industry
in that
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year
.
Marginally
, there is almost same
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proportion
in the years 1994 and 1995 in the IT
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industry(8%)
.
However
, the
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percentage
soared up from 6% to 7% in the
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Service
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Industry
in 1994 and 1995
respectively
.

Meanwhile, the IT
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industry
has the lowest
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proportion
in the
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year
1992 with 6% whereas counterpart has two percent less than the other
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industry
.
Eventually
, there is a similar trend of
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proportion
in all the following years for the
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Service
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Industry
. The IT industry's GDP components are
gradually
increasing in all the consequent years except in 1996.
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second highest
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percentage(12%)
was observed
for IT in the
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year
1998.
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