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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. 7aPw5
The bar chart illustrates the gross domestic product generated from the IT and Service Industry in the UK from 1992 to 2000. It is measured in percentages. Overall, it can be seen that both increased as a percentage of GDP, but IT remained at a higher rate throughout this time. At the beginning of the period, in 1992, the Service Industry accounted for 4 per cent of GDP, whereas IT exceeded this, at just over 6 per cent. Over the next four years, the levels became more similar, with both components standing between 6 and just over 8 per cent. IT was still higher overall, though it dropped slightly from 1994 to 1996.
The bar chart illustrates the gross domestic product generated from the IT and Service Industry in the UK from 1992 to 2000. It
is measured
in percentages.
Overall
, it can be
seen
that both increased as a percentage of GDP,
but
IT remained at a higher rate throughout this time.

At the beginning of the period, in 1992, the Service Industry accounted for 4 per cent of GDP, whereas IT exceeded this, at
just
over 6 per cent. Over the
next
four years, the levels became more similar, with both components standing between 6 and
just
over 8 per cent. IT was
still
higher
overall
, though it dropped
slightly
from 1994 to 1996.
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