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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart indicates components of GDP in the UK between 1992 and 2000. Overall, when we take a look at the chart, we see that there are noticeable differences over the years. First of all, both item have increased. Although their amount of percentage were low, it has raised over the years. The first year 1992, the figures for IT industry and Service industry were 6. 1 % and 4 % respectively. After that the amounts were up to almost 8. 1 % and 6. 2 % for the former and latter industry in 1994. The number of percentages were approximately 7. 9 % and 7 % by 1996. However, the figures have changed a lot for the next years, compared to the former years. Primarily, the amounts were exactly 12 % and 7. 8 % in 1998. Finally, in the last year 2000, the figures for the items were around 15 % and 8. 1 %.
The chart indicates components of GDP in the UK between 1992 and 2000.

Overall
, when we take a look at the chart, we
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that there are noticeable differences over the years.

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First of all
, both item have increased. Although their amount of percentage were low, it has raised over the years. The
first
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year
1992, the figures for IT industry and Service industry were 6. 1 % and 4 %
respectively
.
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After
that the amounts were up to almost 8. 1 % and 6. 2 % for the former and latter industry in 1994. The number of percentages were approximately 7. 9 % and 7 % by 1996.
However
, the figures have
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changed
a lot for the
next
years, compared to the former years.
Primarily
, the amounts were exactly 12 % and 7. 8 % in 1998.
Finally
, in the last
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year
2000, the figures for the items were around 15 % and 8. 1 %.
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