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proportion of world's population as well as division of wealth in different region around the world.

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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of world's population as well as division of wealth in different region around the world. Overall, North America has the greatest wealth of around 34% where as India which has the second largest population has only around 1. 3% of total wealth. China has the largest population in the world accounting of around 25% of world's population where as Other Asia Pacefic, India and Europe has nearly equal population of around 15. 1%. North America Iatin America and Carribean and Rich Asia-pacefic even have same population allocation of under 8%. Africa has approximately 10% of world's population distribution. In contrast, North America can be considered as the richest continent in wealth of around 34%. Both Europe and Rich Asia-Pacefic fall under second and third richest in terms of wealth distribution of 35% and 24% reapectively. China, Other Asia Pacefic and Latin America and Carribean have nearly equal global wealth under 5%. Finally, India and China have the lowest percentage of world's abundance of 1. 3%.
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IELTS academic proportion of world's population as well as division of wealth in different region around the world.

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