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The given chart shows the dqta about average levels of male and female adolescent

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charts denotes the data about average levels of
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adults
and male and
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female
who participation in education and highest education level of
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adults
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in Singapore a more vivid analysis of the whole data reveals that in 2000 adult
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males
were constituted
more than eight who spent at
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school
while
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female
runners were eight
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males
were
moderately
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females
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grown up in a whole life span in 2008 adult
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males
were more and 10 whereas
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female
else was
slightly
decreased in final
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year
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females
and
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in climbed
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year
2000 the largest life
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school
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qualification
with three 2. 13 world smallest flies
were taken
by master
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qualification
in the
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year
primary and secondary
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school
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qualification
have similar popularity among learners with 20 5. 77 and 26. 3
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after a decade University
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qualification
head line share
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primary
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School
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qualification
had
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share to sum up adult male for continuing client in the
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given
period of time whereas
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IELTS academic The given chart shows the dqta about average levels of male and female adolescent

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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