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The chart show type of water and use of water in three areas in three countries

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The assigned combination is of bar and pie by in which former expound percentage and classification of water in the world as well as latter gives information about uses of water in three distinguish areas in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada. In pie chart, 2. 50 % freshwater is noticed in the world. However, the amount of saline water is 97. 50 respectively. Moreover, fresh renewable water was accounting 0. 30 %in the freshwater. Whereas, 0. 90%was underground ice water in the world. Notably fresh groundwater is i29. 95 percent as compared to 69 point 80% is frozen water in glaciers and permanent snow. In second graph, in Egypt, 10% of water was used for domestic work as compared to 40% water was used in agriculture whereas 5% water was usefulness in industry work. More than that, maximum 50% off water utilise for farming in Saudi Arabia which had been least proportion of water was accounted in household work as well as industries. Utilisation of water in Canada was noticed highest proportion in industry vsversus agriculture about 42%and 30% considerably. Overall, it can clear from above graphs that the highest amount of water recorded frozen water in the world. while, the large percentage water use in agriculture in three given countries.
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in three distinguish areas in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada. In pie chart, 2. 50 % freshwater
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, the amount of saline
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is 97. 50
respectively
.
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was accounting 0. 30
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%in
the freshwater. Whereas, 0. 90%was underground ice
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world
.
Notably
fresh groundwater is i29. 95 percent as compared to 69 point 80%
is frozen
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in glaciers and permanent snow. In second graph, in Egypt, 10% of
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was
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used
for domestic work as compared to 40%
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was
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in agriculture whereas 5%
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was usefulness in industry work. More than that, maximum 50% off
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for farming in Saudi Arabia which had been
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in Canada
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vsversus
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recorded frozen
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IELTS academic The chart show type of water and use of water in three areas in three countries

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