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Chart given depicts the global trades in a billion of four various kinds of digital games such as Mobile phone, online, console and handheld games since the year 2000 till 2006.

Chart given depicts the global trades in a billion of four various kinds of digital games such as Mobile phone, online, console and handheld games since the year 2000 till 2006. 30l3J
Chart given depicts the global trades in a billion of four various kinds of digital games such as Mobile phone, online, console and handheld games since the year 2000 till 2006. As it can be seen, in the span of first two years i. e. 2000 and 2001, deals of mobile phone games were zero it was 2002 when it's sales started coming in picture on the contrary handheld games were the most popular ones also earned much greater amount that any of the other games. Broadly speaking, year 2000 saw deals of handheld games at around 11 billion which then increased significantly to 18 billion in the end period(2006) whereas console ones kept on decreasing continuously in sales throughout the given span, where it generated six billion in trades in the first year and went on to reduce slightly till two billion. Furthermore, Online games only came in existence in the second year of given span, from there on sales of it were skyrocketed, it was seen to produce one billion in debut year which then rose to 10 billion in the end, while Mobile phone games' inception took time and came in picture a year later than online ones and since then it has only grown slightly till the end of the period.
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depicts the global trades in a
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of four various kinds of digital
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games
such as Mobile phone, online, console and handheld
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games
since the
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2000 till 2006.

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two years
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2000 and 2001, deals of mobile phone
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were zero it was 2002 when it's sales
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started
coming in picture
on the contrary
handheld
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games
were the most popular
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earned much greater amount that any of the other games.

Broadly
speaking,
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2000
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deals of handheld
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at around 11
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which then increased
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billion
in the
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period(2006) whereas console
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kept
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in trades in the
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and went on to
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till two billion.

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, Online
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came in existence in the second
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of
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span, from there on sales of it
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in debut
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which then rose to 10
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, while Mobile phone games' inception took time and came in picture a
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later than online
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