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The chart show the preferred accommodation holiday in british

The chart show the preferred accommodation holiday in british 9lJ1x

The bar chart illustrates the 4-holiday accommodation chosen by the residents of 4 countries in the United Kingdom during 2010. It is clear that the hotel was the most popular choice in 2010 for vacations in all 4 countries in the UK. All three countries England, Scotland, and Wales were also quite popular using self-catering on holiday, but in Northern Ireland, that holiday accommodation option used at least four services. In contrast, Northern Ireland preferred to use Caravan while the other 3 countries had less used for this. For camping, all 4 countries were not used much. Hotels in England were used about 55 percent more than Scotland by 2 to 3 percentage points while Northern Island and Wales used less than the above two countries. (about 45 percent and almost 50 percent) Self-catering used in all 3 countries England, Scotland and Wales did not have a big difference with the maximum usaged percentage being 30 percent (in Scotland). But in Northern Ireland, it came in at the bottom with a low percentage of usaged of just over 10 percent. In Northern Ireland the percentage using Caravan was the highest in all four countries (around 30 percent) While in England it was the lowest (just under 5 percent) Scotland and Wales were just over 10 percentages and close to 10 percentages) Particularly for camping, all 4 countries were low, the highest was only about 14 percent (in Wales) and the lowest was about 5 percent (in Scotland).

The bar chart illustrates the 4-holiday accommodation chosen by the residents of 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 in the United Kingdom during 2010.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the hotel was the most popular choice in 2010 for vacations in all 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 in the UK. All three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 England, Scotland, and Wales were also
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but
 in Northern Ireland, that holiday accommodation option This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 at least four services. In contrast
, Northern Ireland preferred to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 Caravan while the other 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 had less This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for this. For camping, all 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 were not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 much.

Hotels in England were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 about 55 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
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percentage
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used
 less than the above two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
. (about 45 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 and almost 50 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent)
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used
 in all 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
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big
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usaged
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percentage
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percent
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usaged
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just
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In Northern Ireland the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 using Caravan was the highest in all four You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 (around 30 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent)
 While in England it was the lowest (This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent)
 Scotland and Wales were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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percentages
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)
Particularly
 for camping, all 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 were low, the highest was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 about 14 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 (in Wales) and the lowest was about 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 (in Scotland). 